
INDEPENDENCE!!!!
November 17, 2007Boston times,
Today is a happy day for all Bostonians and all Americans for we have finally defeated the British and have gained our independence after lots of long fought battles. The one that truly showed what the British would have to face if they won another battle was shown at the battle of Yorktown. All the colonists that had put themselves up to fight for the right of all colonist independence were finally rewarded after all the blood was settled down after this battle. Both sides suffered a lot of casualties and had come to a point where it was hard to determine which who would win…but through the courage and strength of our young men and few women we had taken down the British flag. The soldiers weren’t the only people that gained us independence…the continental congress sent the Brittan king the treaty of Paris declaring that all the colonies are to receive independence from the British and are allowed to have they’re own government and are most importantly allowed to trade with any neighboring or other countries.
Written by: John Paulson 111
Ehsan Yaqub
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Nice job, I like your writing, there were some weird things, like “Bostonians” but the rest was very good, just like a news reporter would say it. Bravo!!!!!!
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Great Job ehsan, nicely layed out, very exciting victory description(not so much but nice try!)
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